Monday, 13 January 2014

Strangers in the night

Loud music,
Stepping in Tune,
The Club was full.

Strangers that night,
Our eyes met,
In the darkness.

Ordering drinks,
Shouting our names,
At the Bar we stood.

Strangers that night
We spoke,
Oblivious to the noise.

Only one night,
We remained strangers.
Then sealed forever,
We remain.

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This is my take for the 100 Words on Saturday 2014 -2 hosted at WriteTribe.


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16 comments:

  1. beautiful! Loved reading a happy take on the prompt :)

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    1. Thank you Nabanita...welcome to my space ;)

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    1. Thank you Talya... Nice to see you here again...

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  3. Cool. Reminds me of Frank Sinatra song “Strangers in The Night”. Here are the first few lines. I am sure you will love them:

    “Strangers in the night exchanging glances
    Wond'ring in the night what were the chances
    We'd be sharing love before the night was through”

    ”Something in your eyes was so inviting
    Something in you smile was so exciting
    Something in my heart told me I must have you “

    Just heard that song. Still relishing.

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    1. Thank you SG...I had never heard that song and was taken aback by the similarity of meaning :) Thank you for sharing...

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  4. Nice to see a positive take on the prompt. Lovely writing

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    1. Thank you Magic Quill...Welcome here..

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    1. Thank you Aayesha... :) Welcome here...

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  6. Absolutely love the poem and the essence of enjoying the night::)

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    1. Thank you Vishal...It is great to know the essence of enjoying the night has come out ;)

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