I am taking part in The Write Tribe Festival of Words 1st - 7th September 2013.
Day 1 - Violet
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In a huge mansion in the countryside, there was a young lady sitting on the ledge of an open window, staring farthest as possible. She was twirling her hair with her fingers and dreaming of the days to come. Her name is Violet named after her mother's favourite colour. The path to the front door was lined with violet flowers and the light breeze filled her senses with fragrance.
Violet has been a good student throughout
her school and college days. She is now succeeding in her career and climbing
the corporate ladder very quickly. She had a lot of friends who she spent a lot
of time with. However, very often she would feel alone and be gazing over the
path into nothingness. It was not nothingness for her! It was everything she
wanted at these moments of loneliness...it was her earnest prayer for a
companion who would love her!
This particular Sunday afternoon, she was
oblivious of the world until her mother called, “Violet!” She looked up in a
start! Her mother was walking towards her and she quickly cleared the tears that
had filled her eyes.
“Violet, which world were you lost in
today?” She was known to travel in her mind and fantasize stories. Her mother
made her pen those stories and now they had a bookshelf of them!
“Oh Ma…I was here only just thinking of my
childhood!”
Her mother smiled at the lie and said, “I
don’t believe that! You cleared your tears and missed three phone calls and two
doorbells!”
“No seriously mother, I was lost in my
memories!”
Violet’s stories, poems and fantasies were
missed most by her mother and just wished that she would resume rather than ponder.
Her mother had caught her in that state quite a few times over the past few
months. But ignoring with a sigh, her mother brushed of the thoughts and said, “Shall
we go out shopping today?”
“Sure mother!” eagerly looking for a
change from her own devil’s workshop.
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To be continued …
I am glad you are continuing with the story. You have made me curious about Violet. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyothi...I am glad I evoked curiosity ;)
DeleteI am eagerly waiting for Indigo's entry. :-)
ReplyDeleteTruthfully, even I am ! I have no clue what Indigo plans to do .
DeleteAh! A seven-day story based on colors. Great!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Suresh. Hope you enjoy the story.
DeleteThis is really interesting. I loved the way you described Violet's character.
ReplyDeleteThank you Diana. A peculiar character, right?
DeleteInteresting and intriguing! Waiting for the next part! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa..Hope to see you soon.
DeleteCool concept ! Looking forward to reading more :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Swetha ..I hope I will be able to maintain it. See you soon :)
DeleteFirst, we have similar titles for the first day's post! :) Interesting beginning. Looking forward to Violet's future activities :)
ReplyDeleteWell the colours of the rainbow is the first thing that popped in my head when I heard seven! I guess we will be having similar titles but on different paths. Thank you and see you soon :)
Deletethis one looks to be interesting, so will indigo follow next? looking forward to see how you blend them in.
ReplyDeleteLittle princess, yes indigo will follow but how I have no clue ;) . Hope to see you tomorrow...
DeleteA girl named Violet ! Aah she fascinates me for sure ?
ReplyDeleteIndigo kaun hoga ? ;) Violets friend !
anyway good lck with the challenge aparna
lookng forward to read ya
Thank you Afshan.. Glad you are fascinated...
Deletelovely and interesting beginning. waiting for the next.
ReplyDeleteInitially i thought to wrote about on the theme of colors. yours' an interesting take.
Hi Preetilata...thank you. I have no clue where my take is going to go...I guess we will have to wait and watch ;)
DeleteIt kept my interest and glad it will be continued. Very well scripted:)
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Vishal
Thank you Vishal...Happy that I piqued your interest...
Deletelooking forth for the rest of Violet, I would say, I am intrigued more by the character of the mother who loves the colour violet.. :)
ReplyDeletelv, Ash
Thank you Ash...I didn't even realise the mother's character was present in what I have written.
DeleteInteresting start...
ReplyDeleteWaiting for Day 2!
Thank you Me...Hope I manage to keep up the interest.
DeleteInteresting indeed how you portrait your characters & woven a story out of it.
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Thank you Anu...Hope to keep it up.
DeleteA good start .. like to read the next one ...
ReplyDeleteThank you Angela...the next one will be out soon..
DeleteHow interesting! Looking forward to the next part!
ReplyDeleteThank you Roshni...
DeleteThat's a brilliant theme...seven colors and a story weaved around it...Cool ! I am already in love with Violet :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kajal...
DeleteNice theme...quickly going on to the next part now!
ReplyDeleteThank you Aditi.
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