Monday 15 July 2013

Haiku - here's my first!

The last Wednesday - Corrine's Wednesday Write Tribe prompt was for a Haiku, introduced by Ruchira. I was so sure that I will just not do it..but anyways I took it as a challenge and here's my first Haiku..

Tip Tip Tip Tip Tip
Steaming bhajis found indoors
Soaked from head to toe.

Let me know what you all think...

A word of thanks to Leo for inspiring me and pushing me to take it up! 

Another word of thanks to the Syllable counter created for people like me who do not have patience to actually do the counting ;)

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PS: I forgot to mention Ash - for also motivating me in her own ways! :)

4 comments:

  1. Congratulations. very successful first attempt. Looking forward to reading many more haikus.

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  2. You too.. now I need to as well.. mmm sad face

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