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The key clicks
Entering stealthily
Adjusting to the darkness
Eying the surroundings
With alert ears
Slowly but paced
Items are chosen
Wrapped and moved.
The key clicks
Hurriedly entering
Failing to notice
The emptiness
Sudden screams
On realisation
Police notified
And insurance to be dealt with!
The key clicks !!!
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This piece was written for the WriteTribe Wednesday Prompt 2014 #8.
Please do read my story entry for the same prompt at "http://aparnasdotcom.wordpress.com/2014/02/27/uncle-and-the-key" .
Please do read my story entry for the same prompt at "http://aparnasdotcom.wordpress.com/2014/02/27/uncle-and-the-key" .
Police notified
ReplyDeleteAnd insurance to be dealt with!
Police and insurance are the most cumbersome part.
Hi Kalpana...that's what I thought..so ended it so. :)
DeleteOh dear. That would not be pleasant.
ReplyDeleteI am guessing ti wasn't ... :)
DeleteOh :( Now to deal with police and insurance agency ! aah...uphill tasks !
ReplyDeleteNice poetry :)
Thank you Sreeja...all uphill from there..
DeleteThat's a key to a world wrought with unfairness and unpleasantness. I never thought that the key would lead to such a beautiful world adorn with beautiful words. Thanks for showing me the way:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal...
DeleteLovely poem. A house-owner's pain and problems nicely included in this poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sulekha...
DeleteOh !! That was a lovely poem subtly describing some of the things we wish never happens to our home!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nabanita..Yes I really do hope it never happens to any of our houses...
DeleteAh, this is a poem very beautifully composed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Usha...
DeleteWhoo. And the wrong person must never get that key. A beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteI agree Michelle a wrong person getting the key is terrible...thank you...
Deleteemptiness sudden scream ah i love it.so beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you ....
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